Task 1: The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050.
The graph gives
the
information Correct article usage
apply
of
the proportion of different age groups of Change preposition
on
New
Zealand population in a Correct article usage
the New
hundred year
period of time between 1950 to 2050. The group Add a hyphen
hundred-year
of
over 65 always showed the highest percentage of Change preposition
apply
growth
compared to the other three age groups.
For over
65 category, it stood at 60% in 1950 Correct article usage
the over
then
increased gradually to nearly 70% in 1990 but declined to slightly below 60% in 2050. The second group 38-45 began with 20% of population growth
. This
number rose to 45% in 1990 then
had a small decrease to 35% in the next 10 years. It remained with similar
Correct article usage
a similar
growth
rate until 2050. However
, the third group 25-37 had similar
percentage with 38-45 in 1950 but Correct article usage
a similar
this
figure dropped significantly until a point of no growth
in 2050. On the other hand
, the youngest category of 0-14 showed a fall from 5% to 2% in the first 40 years. Despite that, it rose steady
to 20% Change the adjective
steadily
in
the end of the period.Change the preposition
at
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Vocabulary: Replace the words growth with synonyms.
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