Some people think only students who achieve the best academic results should be rewarded, while others think it is important to reward who show improvement. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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has become a topic of frequent discussion. It is undoubted that

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care is

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important

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I guess that there is still an ongoing debate about the discussion. On the

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hand, some

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say governments should give priority to

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care. The main reason is

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is always the first priority in

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’s daily life. If the

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is lost,

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might become

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and afraid, which must lead stress to rocket for citizens. And when the phenomenon appears,

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will get diseases both mentally and physically.

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, they may produce certain bad moods, like depression. So

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won’t contribute their effort and time

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work or study, which will be not beneficial to the development of

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in the future.

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, others believe that

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’

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should be spent on other important

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. Since they believe that there are other important

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need

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to be done,

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as

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security, education and etc.

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, in

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perspective

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, security is

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one

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of

important

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the important

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priorities

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.

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, if the

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of

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is not used for security, the safety of citizens will be threatened and the social system will be unstable.

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, if the

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of

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is not considered for other important

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only for

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, the social system will be out of balance. And

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, it will influence the development of society and

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.

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, in my perspective, the

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of

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should be based on the actual situation to decide how to

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