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The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line
graph
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 illustrates the
number
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 of visitors to the
UK
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 and
residents
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 who went abroad from the
UK
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 between 1979 and 1999, and the
bar
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graph
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 depicts the most popular countries for
people
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 from the
UK
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 in 1999.
Overall
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, both the
number
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 of
visits
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 and those from the
UK
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 experienced an upward trend over the whole time frame, and the
bar
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graph
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 showed that France was the most popular country among
UK
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residents
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.   Focusing on the
bar
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graph
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, the
number
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 of both
visits
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 and those from the
UK
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 increased slightly over the first seven years, starting at the nearly same numbers of around 10
million
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people
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.
Although
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 the
number
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 of
visits
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 abroad by
UK
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residents
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 rose significantly from 20 to over 50
million
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 over the next 18 years,
visits
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 to the
UK
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 by overseas
residents
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 grew gradually, ending at approximately 26
million
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.   Turning to the
bar
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 charts, France, which was the most popular country for the
UK
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, was visited by nearly 11
million
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people
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 from the
UK
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, followed by Spain, which was the second most popular country and recorded around 9
million
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visits
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. Three countries—the USA, Greece, and Turkey—were visited by less than five
million
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people
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, number, uk, residents, bar, people, visits, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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