"You are planning to take 3 days’ leave. Write an email to the Human Resources Department: Saying why you want to leave How long your leave is What plans of work you have for your leave Who will support your work How you ensure the fulfillment of your plan when you come back to work Try to write a minimum of 50 words."

"Dear Human
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department. I'm
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Truong Nguyen
. I have a plan for 3 days to
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my hometown. I will bring a personal computer to get the job done. My leader will support my work
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I leave. I 'll get the job done when I come back to work."
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