The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The provided chart illustrates the ten countries which are the most consumers and producers of electricity in 2014.
It is clearly observed that the overproducer and overconsumer were China, whilst the least one was Korea.
The figure for China and the USA were significantly higher than other counties. China’s
production
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that of the USA was 4099 Add a comma
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of their consumption was 5322 and 3866 Use synonyms
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and consumption in Russia was approximately equal to each other about 1050. Japan, India, and Canada ranked 4th, 5th, and 6th in Use synonyms
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table and they utilized electricity from 856.7, 698.8 and 499.9 Linking Words
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these three countries produced electricity between 936.2 and 618.9 Linking Words
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was 485.1 Use synonyms
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