Write a letter to the retailer to complain. In the letter: – Explain why you are unhappy – Request a refund – Make arrangements to return the damaged item

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Dear retailer, I am writing

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letter to you regarding an item, I bought from your shop yesterday which came damaged. I will attach the bill with

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letter for your reference. Yesterday, I bought a TV from your shop but when I received the delivery, the display was not working properly and even I noticed a minor crack on the display on the right bottom of the TV. I

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contacted your customer care service and they told me, that they are going to give me an update, but still nothing is received from their side. Kindly arrange transport for the return of the defective item to your shop to get examined. Please verify the product and make a refund of the product as soon as possible and if any

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information is needed please ask for it at +91 7567511503. Thanks for considering the request in advance. Yours sincerely,

patels Sat Aug 12 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

151 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

disappointed
product quality
malfunction
defective
warranty
receipt
customer service
return policy
refund
exchange
inconvenience
consumer rights
acknowledgment
courier
postage
compensation
defective
resolution
turnaround time
escalation

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