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Communication through text messaging and other instant of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be the death grammar and spelling. Do you agree or disagree?

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In contemporary times, with the development of online communication tools, new language forms have emerged that differ from how
languages
 are used in real-life conversations.
As a result
, some
people
 advocate that
this
 linguistic trend will kill traditional grammar and spelling.
This
 essay will discuss the reasons why I disagree with
this
 opinion.
To begin
 with, I regard
languages
 as norms that change and evolve with demands. It means that the
languages
 that we are using at the present time are different from the
languages
people
 used to use in the past.
For example
, even formal English has experienced evolutions in making convenience correspond with the user's needs.
Similarly
, online communication
also
 prioritises convenience and speed,
such
 as "lol" which stands for "laugh out loud" or "BTW" which means "by the way".
Furthermore
, I believe that
people
 are capable of distinguishing between different conversations and using words correctly in various situations. The majority of
people
 with common sense can use language in formal and informal situations.
Therefore
, since even if some online
languages
 became famous
among
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 human society,
people
 would just regard those words as slang, it is not a big deal with
regards
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 to grammar and spelling. In conclusion,
although
 some
people
 are concerned about the declining quality of writing or communication skills
due to
 online
languages
,
this
 is the inevitable evolution of language and does not matter for humans' linguistic ability.
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