Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays weak

countries

are given

money

by developed

countries

,

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poverty is not eradicated.

Consequently

, several assists in other approaches can be done by rich

countries

so as to enhance the circumstance for poorer

countries

. I strongly agree with

this

opinion as what poor

countries

need is development. it is my view that it is an undeniable fact that

money

plays a vital role in everyone's life.

However

, some other basic amenities are more crucial than

money

such

as public health, food sources, education and etc.

In addition

, not only are aids in other fields beneficial for that society but

also

this

measure accelerates the process of development.

For example

, if these poor

countries

begin provided with adept teachers, their education system will revolutionize.

As a result

, boosting the efficiency of basic amenities is the right step in

this

direction.

in contrast

, some people argue that

money

is more substantial than other amenities. They insist that if people have enough

money

, they will be able to have higher standards of living.

However

, I do not find

this

argument convincing as the number of poor people in a society is extremely high and it is impossible to provide a huge amount of

money

for the public.

In addition

, the population of poor

countries

should be taught to strive for their requirements.

As a result

, providing basic needs is a decisive factor in weak

countries

' investment.

For instance

, some poor African

countries

have equipped with up-to-the-minute gadgets so as to have access to a large range of online free courses.

to conclude

, I completely agree with

this

notion that assisting weak

countries

in different approaches regardless of

money

is more important because reinforcing a country's structure gives rise to evolution and development.