The given line graph illustrates the proportion of the total music sold by three different ways between 2011 to 2010.

The given line graph illustrates the Proportion of how many types of music sales

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three different methods. In general, the total

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the

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music sales

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steady throughout the whole period.

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, the figure for CDS Purchased was lower than that for those Downloads by the end of the

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Period. The streams saw a steady rise

40

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% . The Streams method of Music Sales saw a steady rise, starting at 5 % in 2011 and gradually increasing to 40% in 2018,

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became plateauing. The downloads began at 35% in 2011

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and increased to 43% and felly

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until the end Period remaining steady, with the

purchased

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of the CPs following a similar general path.