Smoking is gaining widespread popularity among the youth. Discuss the reasons for this problem and give workable solutions.

Amongst young people, smoking has become very common in
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era. Many
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young
kids today think it is very fashionable or trendy to smoke cigarettes which is one
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major reasons for its popularity. The answer to address
this
issue is to bring about awareness amongst
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youngsters about its negative impacts in later stages
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life. Smoking has been a very common
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amongst adults
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a long time,
however
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, we can see
this
trend spreading amongst the younger generations as well. One of the major reasons for the
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smoking amongst the youth is the status it gives them amongst their peers of being considered "very cool" and on the
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other hand
, the easy
availabilty
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availability
of cigarettes all over the place without proper regulatory
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laws
lawyers
on smoking for minors. Speaking out of personal experience, I was a victim who fell prey to the smoking trend back in
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, where we all considered the students who smoked to be more daring and cool amongst us,
therefore
, under peer pressure I picked up the habit of smoking and many more followed my steps. The possible
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to overcome
this
epidemic of smoking amongst
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highschool
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students is to properly educate them about the future effects it could have on their health and how
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various other aspects of their life. There must be dedicated workshops in schools to address
such
critical issues amongst students like smoking.
For example
, youngsters can be taken to cancer
centers
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to show the patients who are currently suffering from smoking or have
celebrety
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celebrity
visits who have overcome
this
habit and who have considerable influence over the youth. These are some of the methods to counter
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wide spread
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of
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smoking.
To sum up
, the mentality of the younger generation towards smoking must be changed by
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the implementation
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of strategic educational methodologies and passing strict laws towards under aged smoking to prevent the kids fall victim to
this
contagious trend of smoking.
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