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In many places, the crime rate is increasing. What are the causes of increasing crime? What is the best way to deal with this problem?

In many places, the crime rate is increasing. What are the causes of increasing crime? What is the best way to deal with this problem?
#places #crime #rate
Nowadays,
the
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increasing
crime
 became a serious problem. There are several reasons that lead to the rising
crime
rate
,
such
 as
poor
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 economy and
high
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 unemployment
rate
. In my opinion, improving
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 system and providing good social welfare at the same time is the best way to solve the problem. On the one hand, there is
a
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 inverse relationship between the poor economy and the growth of
crime
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rate
. Some people convicted pretty
crime
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crimes
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such
 as stealing
of
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 burglary food for survival. The poor economic situation of their family
force
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 them to
brake
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 the law.
Moreover
, the poor
economic
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also
 result in less educational resources. Some juvenile offenders choose to join gangsters under
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peer pressure
,
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 because they were surrounded by hardened criminals and
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 environment. Maybe they thought it was a good way to establish
connect
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 with their peers.
However
, they don’t know the consequences.
On the other hand
, the government should set
complete
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 social welfare system, in order to help people in need to face their
difficulty
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difficulties
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. If the parents can afford living pressure,
the
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 will have free time to keep an eye on their children.
Furthermore
, education plays a vital role in children’s life. Let a child get a good education not only provide
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 or
she
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 the ability to absorb
knowledges
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,
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 but
also
 help them to regulate their emotions, build proper value in their mind and teach them to be responsible for their life.
In other words
, the authorities should help the public overcome the obstacles in their life and improve
educational
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 system at the same time.
Overall
, there are plenty of
solution
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 to solve the increasing
crime
rate
. If the government can lead the younger generation
go
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 on the right track and improve their living quality. Our future will be absolutely bright.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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