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Most of the people in society enjoy watching crime movies and criminal TV programs. Why do you think people have more interest to watch them? What is the impact on society due to this?

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A large chunk of the population likes to see wrongdoing on TV or on the silver screen.
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 the motive of viewing
this
 genre is different for different people. Out of numerous reasons, the first one is that communities love thrillers to watch and they enjoy them,
secondly
, the crowd who are very cautious ,
also
 like to view crime films because they want to understand  how innocent people are deceived and are in the clutches of these criminals people. Their purpose is not to enjoy but to avoid the situation which can make them be involved in some sort of unpleasant situation the consequences of which may be bad. They try to learn from the movies to keep themselves and their family members safe.
In addition
, there is the public who watch
such
 types of criminal serials just to see the actions happening which they really want to do but
due to
 social norms and
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 they can not.
This
 is called the catharsis effect. Viewing these criminal programs can have a very adverse impact on children who are not able to understand the consequences and they commit crimes. These teens use to commit crimes either for the thrill or
due to
 their short temperament as we have seen in many schools, students
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 ninth grade are stabbing, raping or murdering classmates.
On the other hand
, professional criminals use to learn modus operands and they
also
 repeat the same .  Seeing criminal serials to a small extent may not harm the persons who look at them just for the thrill or to rejoice in them, but if they are heavy viewers, they may not be able to distinguish between the reel world and the real world and will be suffered from Mean World Syndrome in which folks are always susceptible and look at every person as they are criminal and every situation inviting crimes.
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The response to the task is somewhat incomplete. While the essay addresses the reasons people enjoy watching crime movies and the impact on society, the ideas are not fully developed or supported with relevant examples. More thorough analysis and elaboration on the impact of crime movies on society are needed to provide a more comprehensive response to the task.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fascination
  • mysterious
  • psychological
  • intricate
  • edge of their seats
  • justice system
  • reflection
  • critical thinking
  • exaggerated perception
  • desensitize
  • real-world consequences
  • public opinion
  • criminal justice
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