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Today family members eat fewer meals together. What is your opinion on this?

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The graph illustrates the difference in the salary between a person who hasn't had any
job
 experience and someone who has already had three years of skill.
In addition
, all data is grouped by various careers with stated average working hours a week.
According to
 the bar chart, income with and without practice is almost the same except for a police officer, for whom distinction consists of 2 thousand pounds. Another noticeable feature is the contrast in earnings of a police officer and a nurse, which are considerably low in comparison with the profits of a subway driver and a firefighter.
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 in salaries of stated professions strikes 29 thousand pounds
in
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at
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 the maximum.
However
, working
by
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a firefighter
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firefighter
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, individuals are to spend 55 hours a week at their
job
,
what
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 makes
this
 work more difficult and less attractive despite its profitability. The most efficient choice in comparison with others is a metro driver because of the highest salary and the lowest working pressure. Taking everything into account, possession of
skill
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 almost doesn’t have an effect on a
job
 income except for a police officer, where the difference is 2 thousand pounds. The most optimal decision is to work as an underground driver
due to
 the tempting profit and suitable
job
 conditions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • societal changes
  • modern work schedules
  • individualism
  • technology's influence
  • foster
  • communication
  • fast-paced lifestyle
  • adverse effects
  • dietary health
  • social development
  • restoring
  • isolating effects
  • digital media
  • face-to-face interaction
  • strengthening family bonds
  • family cohesion
  • crucial element
  • societal health
  • policies
  • initiatives
  • traditional values
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