Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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of people believe that
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and
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are much more important
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schools’ curriculum,
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other individuals do not share
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point of view. Both of these
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are important
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but in
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different
aspects. Supporters of the subject of history usually say that history repeats, so without knowing
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the past
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,
young
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generation will not be able to
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decent
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future
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. From some aspect,
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is true and was even proved in the past.
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, when Mongol Empire was built by Chingiz Khan,
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the Chinese
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king did not see any threat in it,
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however
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Chingiz-Khan almost destroyed his country, afterwards. Later, in
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century, Uzbek-khan
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made the same mistake, when neglected Kazakh Khanate.
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, Kazakh-Khanate destroyed his country in
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century. What I mean is that those people had not been taking lessons from history,
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, the consequences were disagreeable. Supporters of the second point of view,
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, say that in today’s digital
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and
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are the
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of
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future
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the future
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. It is useless to refuse, that these
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will affect people’s lives in the near
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. Because, even today,
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revolution influenced all fields of people’s lives, starting from medicine and ending with aviation. The advance in
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,
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invention
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the invention
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of
robo-cleaners
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robot-cleaners
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and wash-dishers
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wash-dishers
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are used in daily
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life
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.
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,
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of diseases, which
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impossible to cure in the past, is cured now via
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the development
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of
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.
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, people now can get from one continent to another one on
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modern, improved planes, which are the outcome of Technologies, as well. In conclusion, all of these
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are important for children’s development.
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, I would agree that humanity’s
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is behind
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Science
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and
Technology
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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