The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the Uk, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
The bar chart
compare
the average number of Change the verb form
compares
minutes
of telephone communicates
in three different categories in Replace the word
communication
UK
over 8 years.
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the UK
Overall
, communicating with local
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the local
type
had the highest average of telephone calls. In contrast
, the mobile type
had the
negligible total Correct article usage
apply
minutes
.
To be precise, you can see that Mobile
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the Mobile
type
had risen trend also
national
and international Correct article usage
the national
type
rise by a similar figure from just under 10 billion minutes
to around 50 and from around 40 minutes
to a little more than 60 respectively during these 8 years.
For the
most popular Change preposition
The
types
of call Fix the agreement mistake
type
which
is
local lines you can see small rises Correct pronoun usage
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around
15 billion Change preposition
of around
minutes
each year from 1995 to 1999. However
, this
type
of communicating
had fallen figure between 1999 to 2002 and it was about 90 billion Replace the word
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minutes
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