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The table illustrates the 6 languages which are the most popular in the world with the number of people use it.

The table illustrates the 6 languages which are the most popular in the world with the number of people use it.
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The given data states the most 6 different
languages
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 used by people in different parts of the world.
Overall
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, Mandarin Chinese is been spoken by the highest number of people followed by
English
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. Portuguese and Arabic are the least popular
languages
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 among all others. The majority of Chines is been spoken by native
speakers
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whereas
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English
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 is the most popular among those who considered
English
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 as a second language.
To begin
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 with, out of a total 1090
million
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 of Chinese
speakers
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 900
million
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 are locals,
in contrast
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, a total of 942 are
English
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speakers
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 but only 229
million
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 were native
speakers
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.
Furthermore
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, there are no sharp changes found for Hindi and Spanish
speakers
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 because almost the same population talk in their original language, around 350
million
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.
On the other hand
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, Arabic and Portuguese, are not been popular apart from their country's people, with, only 24
million
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 and 10
million
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 additional
languages
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, respectively. Actually, native
speakers
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 are
also
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 very low compared with the other four countries
hence
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 the total number of
speakers
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 of these
languages
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 is
also
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 very less which is around 200
million
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 throughout the world.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words languages, english, speakers, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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