The graph below gives information about the number of tourists who visited five different countries between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of international tourists who visited five different countries - the Use synonyms
USA
, France, Malaysia, Egypt, and Use synonyms
Brazil
- between 1995 and 2010. Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
USA
was the most popular destination throughout Use synonyms
this
period compared to the other countries. Linking Words
On the contrary
, Linking Words
Brazil
was the least visited country in 2010.
In 1995, the Use synonyms
USA
attracted 70 Use synonyms
million
tourists, and a gradual increase was observed between 1995 and 2005. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
number
of visitors decreased gradually to 90 Use synonyms
million
in 2010. Use synonyms
In contrast
, France experienced a significant rise in visitor numbers, increasing by 90 Linking Words
million
from 1995 to 2010. By 2005, Malaysia had seen a rise in the Use synonyms
number
of visitors to 30 Use synonyms
million
, Use synonyms
whereas
Egypt and Linking Words
Brazil
had only around 15 Use synonyms
million
visitors each.
In conclusion, in 1995, the Use synonyms
USA
was the most popular destination, with France coming second in terms of visitor arrivals. Use synonyms
Conversely
, Egypt was the least popular destination Linking Words
initially
but quickly surpassed Linking Words
Brazil
to become the second least popular. Use synonyms
Overall
, all five countries experienced an increase in the Linking Words
number
of tourists between 1995 and 2010.Use synonyms
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