The graph below gives information about the number of tourists who visited five different countries between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of international tourists who visited five different countries - the USA
, France, Malaysia, Egypt, and Brazil
- between 1995 and 2010. Overall
, the USA
was the most popular destination throughout this
period compared to the other countries. On the contrary
, Brazil
was the least visited country in 2010.
In 1995, the USA
attracted 70 million
tourists, and a gradual increase was observed between 1995 and 2005. However
, the number
of visitors decreased gradually to 90 million
in 2010. In contrast
, France experienced a significant rise in visitor numbers, increasing by 90 million
from 1995 to 2010. By 2005, Malaysia had seen a rise in the number
of visitors to 30 million
, whereas
Egypt and Brazil
had only around 15 million
visitors each.
In conclusion, in 1995, the USA
was the most popular destination, with France coming second in terms of visitor arrivals. Conversely
, Egypt was the least popular destination initially
but quickly surpassed Brazil
to become the second least popular. Overall
, all five countries experienced an increase in the number
of tourists between 1995 and 2010.Submitted by chien10955 on
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