The graph below gives information about the number of tourists who visited five different countries between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the number of tourists who visited five different countries between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
number
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of international tourists who visited five different countries - the
USA
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, France, Malaysia, Egypt, and
Brazil
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- between 1995 and 2010.
Overall
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, the
USA
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was the most popular destination throughout
this
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period compared to the other countries.
On the contrary
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,
Brazil
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was the least visited country in 2010. In 1995, the
USA
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attracted 70
million
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tourists, and a gradual increase was observed between 1995 and 2005.
However
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, the
number
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of visitors decreased gradually to 90
million
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in 2010.
In contrast
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, France experienced a significant rise in visitor numbers, increasing by 90
million
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from 1995 to 2010. By 2005, Malaysia had seen a rise in the
number
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of visitors to 30
million
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,
whereas
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Egypt and
Brazil
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had only around 15
million
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visitors each. In conclusion, in 1995, the
USA
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was the most popular destination, with France coming second in terms of visitor arrivals.
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, Egypt was the least popular destination
initially
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but quickly surpassed
Brazil
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to become the second least popular.
Overall
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, all five countries experienced an increase in the
number
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of tourists between 1995 and 2010.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, usa, brazil, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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