You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. 

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth  between 1995 and present.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
The masterplan represents the improvements made in the
village
of Ryemouth
after
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1995 to today.
Overall
, in the north of Ryemouth, it can be seen that over the years the housing community has increased in number and the farmland and forest
park
have merged to form a golf course and tennis ground. In the southern lands, the shops have been converted to
restauraunts
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restaurants
and
fish
market
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markets
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to apartments. The cafe and the hotel have remained unchanged. In 1995, the
north western
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northwestern
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side
of the
village
consisted of residential units
whereas
the
the
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north eastern
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northeastern
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side
is
madeup
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made up
of
the
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farmland and the forest
park
. the south of the
village
is completely
sea facing
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and the
south western
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southwestern
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part of the rural area has shops and
fish
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a fish
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market across the road. A
sea facing
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cafe and hotel opposite
to
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each other are placed
on
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in
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the
south eastern
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southeastern
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part of the
village
. The fishing port is accessible by the beach. Today, Reymouth
village
has developed dramatically. Starting off with the
north east
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northeast
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side
of Reymouth, more
number of
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villas have been constructed and the road has been extended. The farmland and the forest
park
have been transformed into a golf and tennis arena. The shops towards the
south west
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southwest
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side
have been converted
to
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into
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restraunts
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restaurants
and the
fish
market
to
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into
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ocean facing
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apartments. The
fish
port has been removed and the cafe has remained the same,
however
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a small car
park
has been introduced to the hotel.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words village, park, fish, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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