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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The masterplan represents the improvements made in the
village
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 of Ryemouth
after
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 1995 to today.
Overall
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, in the north of Ryemouth, it can be seen that over the years the housing community has increased in number and the farmland and forest
park
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 have merged to form a golf course and tennis ground. In the southern lands, the shops have been converted to
restauraunts
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restaurants
 and
fish
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market
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markets
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 to apartments. The cafe and the hotel have remained unchanged. In 1995, the
north western
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northwestern
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side
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 of the
village
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 consisted of residential units
whereas
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 the
the
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north eastern
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northeastern
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side
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 is
madeup
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made up
 of
the
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farmland and the forest
park
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. the south of the
village
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 is completely
sea facing
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sea-facing
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 and the
south western
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southwestern
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 part of the rural area has shops and
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fish
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a fish
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 market across the road. A
sea facing
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sea-facing
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 cafe and hotel opposite
to
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apply
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each other are placed
on
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in
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 the
south eastern
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southeastern
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 part of the
village
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. The fishing port is accessible by the beach. Today, Reymouth
village
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 has developed dramatically. Starting off with the
north east
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northeast
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side
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 of Reymouth, more
number of
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apply
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villas have been constructed and the road has been extended. The farmland and the forest
park
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 have been transformed into a golf and tennis arena. The shops towards the
south west
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southwest
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side
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 have been converted
to
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into
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restraunts
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restaurants
 and the
fish
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 market
to
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into
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ocean facing
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ocean-facing
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 apartments. The
fish
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 port has been removed and the cafe has remained the same,
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however
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,however
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 a small car
park
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 has been introduced to the hotel.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words village, park, fish, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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