You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The masterplan represents the improvements made in the
village
of Ryemouth after
1995 to today.
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from
Overall
, in the north of Ryemouth, it can be seen that over the years the housing community has increased in number and the farmland and forest park
have merged to form a golf course and tennis ground. In the southern lands, the shops have been converted to restauraunts
and Correct your spelling
restaurants
fish
market
to apartments. The cafe and the hotel have remained unchanged.
In 1995, the Fix the agreement mistake
markets
north western
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northwestern
side
of the village
consisted of residential units whereas
the the
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north eastern
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northeastern
side
is madeup
of Correct your spelling
made up
the
farmland and the forest Correct article usage
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park
. the south of the village
is completely sea facing
and the Add a hyphen
sea-facing
south western
part of the rural area has shops and Correct your spelling
southwestern
fish
market across the road. A Correct article usage
a fish
sea facing
cafe and hotel opposite Add a hyphen
sea-facing
to
each other are placed Change preposition
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on
the Change preposition
in
south eastern
part of the Correct your spelling
southeastern
village
. The fishing port is accessible by the beach.
Today, Reymouth village
has developed dramatically. Starting off with the north east
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northeast
side
of Reymouth, more number of
villas have been constructed and the road has been extended. The farmland and the forest Correct quantifier usage
apply
park
have been transformed into a golf and tennis arena. The shops towards the south west
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southwest
side
have been converted to
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into
restraunts
and the Correct your spelling
restaurants
fish
market to
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into
ocean facing
apartments. The Add a hyphen
ocean-facing
fish
port has been removed and the cafe has remained the same, however
a small car Add a comma
,however
park
has been introduced to the hotel.Submitted by shuaibshariff321 on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words village, park, fish, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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