The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the
price
of copper
, nickel and zinc
changed each month in 2014. As can been
from the graph, the nickel Change the verb form
be
price
started at a peaked the pinnacle percentage, and in Correct article usage
the end
end
Add a comma
,end
this
figure became the lowest point. Meanwhile, copper
and zinc
prices increased.
In January, Nickle started price
at 6%, and the Add an article
the price
copper
and zinc
occupied 2% and only 1% respectively. When the time went, Nickle
Change noun form
Nickle's
price
dramatically fell to -3% before June, after
that the figure up and downs to 1% since the end of Correct word choice
and after
year
.
Add an article
the year
However
, zinc
began at 2% and sharply peaked in February at 3%, after that the price
with
Change preposition
of
copper
declined under
Change preposition
by under
the
0%, but Correct article usage
apply
this
was higher than the
Nickel. After June, cooper and Correct article usage
apply
zinc
increased and remained stable until October. In October zinc
and copper
decreased approximately
0.5% and -1% respectively, Change preposition
by approximately
than
the Correct your spelling
then
price
of zinc
(2%) increased and copper
increased to nearly Zinc
price
at the end
of year
.Add an article
the year
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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