The graph shows the export of thousand of cars in Uzbekistan between 2014 and 2019.

The bar chart illustrates the figure for cars A and B exported in Uzbekistan from 2014 to 2019.

Overall

, cars A and B accounted for the lowest percentage of selling to foreign countries in 2015 and 2016, respectively.

In contrast

, The figure for those cars reached a peak in 2018.

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The graph shows the export of thousand of cars in Uzbekistan between 2014 and 2019.

A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

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Teenagers are spending too much time on computers and this will lead to a severe problem in their mental and physical health. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?