The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
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This
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bar graph illustrates the proportion of citizens in England and Wales about their ownership of house, years between 1918 and 2011.
According to
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this
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figure, it is notable that the rate of households who owned their own house has increased,
while
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the number of people who lived in rented accommodations has been decreasing from the beginning until the year 2001.
Although
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,
it is clear that
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, in 2011 the percentage of householders in owned
houses
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are higher than the population who lived in rented accommodations.
Moreover
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, in 1971 the proportion was the same in both who owned
houses
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and lived in rented
houses
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.
However
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, we can see that the highest amount of people who stayed
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in
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rented
accommodations
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accommodation
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was in 1918,
whereas
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the lowest amount can be seen in 2001.
Overall
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, the rate of both householders who rented and owned
houses
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shows the same pattern.
On the other hand
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, the maximum percentage of living in their own
houses
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was in 2001 and the minimum percentage shown in 1918.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words houses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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