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Many people believe that it's better to learn something in a group rather than individually. Do you agree or disagree.

#people #group
People have multiple ways to gain knowledge in a subject. There is a thought that
group
 study is more beneficial than individual learning. In my opinion,
this
 statement is true and the reasons are discussed below. First and foremost, when the aspirants learn in a
group
, they get ideas
in
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 different points of
views
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 which help them to aspire
a
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deep knowledge regarding the subject.
Such
 opportunity is not possible
,
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 when learning individually. In Indian schools, teachers give
group
project
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 in relation to the subject in their syllabus. Students have to discuss in the
group
 about the topic and express the results.
This
 meeting is helpful to learn that topic easily with various answers.
In addition
 to
this
,
group
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 is an opportunity for the participants to express their ideas in front of a
group
.
Such
 access
help
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 them to become more confident and strong in later life.
For instance
, some individuals are reluctant to speak in front of others, so
such
group
 studies gradually enable them to talk Infront of others.
However
, individual learning is not a negative development. People can easily concentrate on their own imagination. It helps to develop their skills and individual has his own freedom to learn. In conclusion, Even though individual learning has its own advantages, I prefer that
group
 learning is more beneficial
due to
 its vast positive outcomes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collaborative environment
  • discussion
  • debate
  • exchange of ideas
  • critical soft skills
  • communication
  • teamwork
  • leadership
  • emotional and motivational support
  • isolating
  • personalized pace
  • efficient learning
  • self-discipline
  • accountability
  • educational progress
  • distractions
  • group dynamics
  • commitment
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