ou would like to take a part-time course at the university, but don’t have the money to do it. Write a letter to an organization that supports students financially and asks for help. In your letter – Describe your qualification and degree. – Provide some details of the course. – Explain how this course will help you in the future.

dear sir, I, Suman Preet Kaur recently immigrated from Punjab, India to Canada for better study and job opportunities but here I am finding it very difficult to continue my study because of a lack of money . One of my friends suggests I ask for help from your organisation. I am writing

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letter to inform you that I would like to enrol in a part-time course at the university

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I have done b.sc nursing and want to continue in the same field with advanced nursing practice. Upcoming month a part-time course for intensive care is going to start. I really want to get admission but I am unable to do so as my financial condition is poor. In future, there is a lot of scope for nursing so

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course helpful for me in my financial stability. looking forward to hearing a positive reply from your side . Yours faithfully Suman Preet Kaur

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

158 words

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The free movement of goods across national borders has long been a controversial issue. Some people argue that it is necessary for economic growth, while others claim that it damages local industries. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

You recently bought an electronic device from a store, but it is not working properly. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter: Describe the problem with the device. Explain what you have done to try to resolve the issue. State what you would like the manager to do.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many teenagers now have their own smart phone. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion.

In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?