Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations, Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
A group of individuals present the view that accepting the reality and bad situations
such
as a dissatisfied job or not enough wages, Linking Words
whereas
others believe that striving for enhancing the circumstance plays a vital role in development. I wholeheartedly agree with the latter opinion as it will have significant impacts on society.
On the one hand, some Linking Words
people
justifiably believe that what a country need is to move forward and without motivation the population is more likely to be aimless and suffer from diseases Use synonyms
such
as depression. Linking Words
Moreover
, not only has a thriving country developed Infrastructure but Linking Words
also
there is filled with Linking Words
people
enriched in faith. Use synonyms
Therefore
, if each person makes an effort to augment his abilities, there will be an improvement in every rein of society. Linking Words
In addition
, governments play a vital role in providing the public with greater access to higher education levels. Linking Words
For example
, some programs have been launched freely so as to teach more details in every subject to gain prosperity.
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On the other hand
, another group of Linking Words
people
argue that it makes no difference whether they try or not. They insist that lack of funds and not fulfilling jobs are stay a part of their lives. Use synonyms
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, I do not find Linking Words
this
argument convincing as by Linking Words
this
look, deleterious circumstances will have rose dramatically since Linking Words
people
get used to the worse situations and a problem has its own solution. Use synonyms
Thus
, Today, more than ever before, grit and determination are decisive factors in Linking Words
people
’s lives and government ministers and decision-makers, as well. Use synonyms
Otherwise
, they will become a slave of a richer country. Linking Words
For instance
, some poor countries which accepted their situations are always in colonize by the governments in prosperous and successful areas, they have to sell all of their products at lower prices to the point that some weak governments do not harness their countries even.
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To conclude
, in my view, it is highly beneficial to make an effort which results in development and prosperity. Linking Words
Moreover
, accepting the circumstance will have detrimental influences on Linking Words
people
and the county.Use synonyms
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