The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much
The provided pie charts illustrate the average proportions of
sodium
, saturated fats, and added Use synonyms
sugar
in common meals (breakfast, lunch, dinner, and snacks) consumed by the people in the USA.
It is clearly observed from the charts that people consume more Use synonyms
sodium
and saturated fat in lunch meals and dinners, whilst they consume more Use synonyms
sugar
in snacks. Use synonyms
However
, they eat all three Linking Words
nutrient
approximately equal to each other in breakfasts.
For Change to a plural noun
nutrients
the
breakfast, the figures for Correct article usage
apply
sodium
, saturated fat and added Use synonyms
sugar
fluctuate around 15%. Use synonyms
Moreover
, in lunch meals, the proportion of added Linking Words
sugar
is 19% Use synonyms
whereas
, that of Linking Words
sodium
and saturated fat are higher in 29% and 26%, respectively. About consuming three nutrients in snacks, the figure for added Use synonyms
sugar
is higher at 42% whilst, that of Use synonyms
sodium
and saturated fat are lower at 14% and 21%. Use synonyms
Finally
, at dinner people tend to eat more Linking Words
sodium
about 43% Use synonyms
similarly
, they are willing to consume saturated fat around 37%. Linking Words
Linking Words
by
contrast, the US public Capitalize word
By
consume
the lowest amount of Change the verb form
consumes
sugar
about 23%.Use synonyms
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