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The pie charts indicate changes in the proportions of energy produced in a country from 1983 to 2003.

The pie charts indicate changes in the proportions of energy produced in a country from 1983 to 2003.
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The Pie charts Illustrate variations in the
percentage
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 of five different types of
energy
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 produced in a certain country between the years 1983 and 2003.
Overall
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, Oil constituted the large proportion of
energy
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 produced out of five sources of
energy
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 in a country
while
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 Natural gas carried the least.
To begin
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, oil recorded the highest
percentage
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 of
energy
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 production in 1983 which was 42%, but it slightly decreased by 4% to 30 in 2003.
On the other hand
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, Nuclear power increased in the same
percentage
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 which oil produced declined, respectively by 20% and 24% from 1983-2003. A similar trend was noticed in Coal which has considerably dropped by 23% to 11% in a given period of years.
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, it can be seen that Hydropower production significantly increased within the two decades, which was 11% in 1983 and that
percentage
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 was doubled in 2023 and produced 22% whilst Natural gas remained unchanged in both years at 4%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, energy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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