You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accomadation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord's workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success.

Dear Sir I hope
this
letter
for
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you in radiant health and the best of spirit. I am writing
this
letter with the crucial purpose of complaining about
,
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because I study English language school in Barrington. I am a student .For
this
,reason I live apartment , but I have had several problems ,
for instance
: hot
drink
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or heating for some time. On the one hand ,the first and most important thing which should be mentioned is that the
drink
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faucet does not work well and
secondly
, the heater is stopped working. On the other side,
This
problem is
also
bothering my neighbours because the water valve is not closing properly and it is
also
throwing water into my neighbours' house, so I hope that you will find a solution to
this
problem soon.
Finally
, having given the previous facts, I hope you will take immediate action in order to solve the issue
as well as
look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Thus
do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully, Sarvinoz
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