You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accomadation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord's workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success.

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Dear Sir I hope

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you in radiant health and the best of spirit. I am writing

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letter with the crucial purpose of complaining about

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because I study English language school in Barrington. I am a student .For

this

,reason I live apartment , but I have had several problems ,

for instance

: hot

drink

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or heating for some time. On the one hand ,the first and most important thing which should be mentioned is that the

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faucet does not work well and

secondly

, the heater is stopped working. On the other side,

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problem is

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bothering my neighbours because the water valve is not closing properly and it is

also

throwing water into my neighbours' house, so I hope that you will find a solution to

this

problem soon.

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, having given the previous facts, I hope you will take immediate action in order to solve the issue

as well as

look forward to hearing from you in the near future.

Thus

do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully, Sarvinoz

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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7 paragraphs

176 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accomadation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord's workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success.

Fully explain your ideas

Completing a university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Many manufactured food and drinks contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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