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A glance at a line graph and a table provided reveal the
temperatures
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per month on average and hourly sunshine in three specific megacities namely London, New
York
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and
Sydney
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.
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, the average monthly
temperatures
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in London and New
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witness
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a progressive fluctuation and the reverse is true for those in
Sydney
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. Meanwhile, the duration of sunshine in New
York
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is longer than others’ data. In terms of
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per month,
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Sydney
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is the hottest city in January with approximately 26, its temperature range dips dramatically and consistently, reaching an astonishing number at 15 in July, which is considered the coldest time
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the year of
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city. After that,
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’s
temperatures
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bounce back gradually and relentlessly to slightly over 25
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of the period.
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, despite having homogenous trends, the
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in London and New
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experience different levels of growth.
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the former launches at merely 10 in January and accelerates significantly to an excessively high number at 25 after 7 months before witnessing a sharp deterioration back to its initial point, the latter witnesses
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coldest time at exactly 5 at the beginning of the year
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surges exponentially to the highest temperature in July at roughly 30 before decreasing gradually till December. Regarding annual
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when the sun shines, the longest duration is in New
York
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with exactly 2535
hours
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, closely followed by that in
Sydney
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with 2473
hours
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. Meanwhile, London’s sunshine
hours
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make up the least significant number with over 1158
hours
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.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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