Some people think that news and media are affecting our life in a positive way while others disagree. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.

Some
people
argue that our lives have no good affected by several
news
and kinds of
media
, I strongly believe that they are
positive
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influenceing
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influencing
influences
our lifetime. The
news
and
media
might have easy access to everybody. Even if the access
people
are
children
or adults. When
the
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children
view the
news
and the
contents
of
media
.The
contesnts
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contents
contestants
will have bad effects on the
children
. Because the
contents
do not have a child filter.
In addition
, nowadays
issue
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issues
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of society like
this
fake
news
and provocative
contents
, that
contents
have many problems. But, the
contents
had
plaftforms
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platforms
perceive
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the issue, and
then
they should make an
effot
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effort
to solve the problems.
However
, the
news
and
media
have a lot of many useful information. natural
desasters
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disasters
or other emergency cases that need faster delivery of information.
For example
,
closing
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of
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dangerous roads and when wanted to mass blood pack etc. Some
people
should be to need the information.
People
who stay home will get real-time
news
about the world in their
bed
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beds
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. In the morning, when I wake up and just pick up
the
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my
smatphone
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smartphone
, other
countries
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stock
news
will take it.
That is
a very big benefit. The
reasons
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reason
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for
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this
is possible is because of the
news
and
media
. For the reasons mentioned above, I totally agree with the opinion, because the
contents
of
news
and
media
have positive more than negative
affects
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effects
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on
ours
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our
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lives. but we must need more
heigher
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higher
technical filtering systems for
children
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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