The maps show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25 year period from 1980 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The map depicts the transformation that took in Youngsville in New Zealand between 1980 and 2005.
Overall
, it can be seen that the northwest corner had made dramatic changes in the town. Numerous homes were refurbished as skyscrapers.
To begin
, northwest in past had major areas with only trees, but it got many developments of parks, a stadium, and also
parking spaces in 2005. Moreover
, the northeast part in the year 1980 was only houses near the seashore. In addition
, it refurbished houses and made train tracks in need of a better railway transport system.
On the other hand
, the southern western part in 1980 had , woodland and empty spaces is
altered into factories and warehouses. Unnecessary verb
apply
However
, the parking spaces remain unchanged and airports and schools remain in the same position. Furthermore
, the trees were reduced and in a
southeast ,corner there are few changes the houses were refurbished as skyscrapers. Correct article usage
the
Along with
it, there are some factories built in 2005.Submitted by fazilharis20 on
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