The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
The provided bar graph illustrates information about the change in
people
who were born in Use synonyms
Australia
and outside Use synonyms
Australia
Use synonyms
lived
in locations Correct pronoun usage
who lived
such
as Linking Words
cities
, Use synonyms
towns
and rural Use synonyms
areas
from 1995 to 2010, with data Use synonyms
prsented
on the percentage scale. Correct your spelling
presented
Overall
, the number of Linking Words
people
lived in Use synonyms
cities
more than in rural Use synonyms
areas
and Use synonyms
towns
.
In detail, Use synonyms
people
born outside Use synonyms
Australia
tended to live in Use synonyms
cities
in 1995 and 2010. Use synonyms
Also
, no more they did not like living in rural Linking Words
areas
. In 1995, the number of Use synonyms
people
in rural Use synonyms
areas
living was Use synonyms
at
40%. Change preposition
apply
However
, in 2010, the figure decreased to about 10% Linking Words
one fourth
.
Add a hyphen
one-fourth
In addition
, Linking Words
people
too born in Use synonyms
Australia
tended to live in Use synonyms
cities
in 1995 and 2010 . But, a lot of Use synonyms
people
left rural Use synonyms
areas
and Use synonyms
towns
between 1995 and 2010. The number of Use synonyms
people
in Use synonyms
towns
and rural Use synonyms
areas
living Use synonyms
were
20% to around 10%, Correct subject-verb agreement
was
30
% to about 10% decreased respectively.Correct word choice
and 30
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, australia, cities, towns, areas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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