The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
The provided bar graph illustrates information about the change in
people
who were born in Australia
and outside Australia
lived
in locations Correct pronoun usage
who lived
such
as cities
, towns
and rural areas
from 1995 to 2010, with data prsented
on the percentage scale. Correct your spelling
presented
Overall
, the number of people
lived in cities
more than in rural areas
and towns
.
In detail, people
born outside Australia
tended to live in cities
in 1995 and 2010. Also
, no more they did not like living in rural areas
. In 1995, the number of people
in rural areas
living was at
40%. Change preposition
apply
However
, in 2010, the figure decreased to about 10% one fourth
.
Add a hyphen
one-fourth
In addition
, people
too born in Australia
tended to live in cities
in 1995 and 2010 . But, a lot of people
left rural areas
and towns
between 1995 and 2010. The number of people
in towns
and rural areas
living were
20% to around 10%, Correct subject-verb agreement
was
30
% to about 10% decreased respectively.Correct word choice
and 30
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, australia, cities, towns, areas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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