The bar chart below shows the top 10 countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The provided bar graph illustrates information about ranking for countries of the making and spending of electricity in 2014, with data presented on the
billon
kWh. Correct your spelling
billion
Overall
, China
had the highest making and spending of electricity. And, South Korea
was the lowest production and usage.
In detail, China
and the US were significantry
higher than other countries in the production and consumption of electricity.Correct your spelling
significantly
China
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China's
figure
was more than 5 times
higher than Russia, which ranked third and top
10 Correct article usage
the top
country
South Change to a plural noun
countries
Korea
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Korea's
figure
more
than around 11 Add a missing verb
was more
times
. Also
, The US figure
was 4 times
higher than Russia
and 10 Change noun form
Russia's
times
higher than South Korea
.
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Korea's
In addition
, other countries except China
and the US had about equal figure
between around 500 and 1000 billion kWh.The rankings were Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and South Fix the agreement mistake
figures
Korea
. Among them, only Germany had a figure
that consumption was higher than production
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the production
of
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by
aobut
30 billion kWh.Correct your spelling
about
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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