Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all the time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
As some students get into universities, they are interested in studying and learning various
subjects
in addition
to their field study
. Fix the agreement mistake
studies
Nevertheless
, it is believed by a number of students spending
all their Wrong verb form
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time
being qualified in the main subjects
. In my opinion, being multi-tasked is more effective and profitable these days.
Initially
, I am sure that most people agree with this
fact, picking up several courses is a way of achieving different skills which are necessary in the modern world, since, broadened knowledge helps in understanding various disciplines. Moreover
, having information on multiple subjects
, and exposure to them, result in increased adaptability. In this
case, individuals become more adaptable and flexible in their thinking, enabling them to adjust to new challenges and situations. For instance
, a company in Denmark faced problems, employees
who had a variety of knowledge in several topics, could help more to solve problems.
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and employees
On the other hand
, focusing on just the main subjects
in university leads to not having some problems like time
management tackles. Since,
balancing Remove the comma
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time
on doing a bunch of works
is very demanding, spending Fix the agreement mistake
work
time
on essential courses can reduce the amount of stress and pressure on a person. Additionally
, hard-working and studying a lot in one main field results in more career opportunities. Whereas
,
someone concentrates on a specific subject it can be beneficial to get a job related to the subject. As a case in point, when several volunteers apply for a job the admission office would accept who is more experienced definitely.
By way of conclusion, once again I state my idea. Remove the comma
apply
However
, extended knowledge of subjects
related to the main field is important, having
manifold skills is crucial by far.Correct word choice
and having
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