Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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believe that community habit does not lead to too many consequences on the natural ecosystem, others argue that

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brings about various negative effects. I agree with the latter point of view. In my opinion, the population’s awareness affects directly the quality of the environment. On the one hand, there are several reasons why

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believe human activity cannot decrease environmental pollution significantly. The first reason is that there are few

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who can raise awareness to protect natural habitats.

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, we witnessed numerous enterprise companies log forests for their personal income which depletes natural resources.

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, the earth may face offsetting C02s emissions and habitat destruction. Another contributor is uncontrolled weather. To specify,

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think that natural disaster is the main reason for the environment destroying.

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, the community continues to litter, build construction projects, and discharge plastic waste without any responsibilities.

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, I believe that fouling organisms is human.

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, carbon footprint, ozone layer depletion, and climate change are caused by the population.

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, urbanization and the development of vehicles and traffic in several big cities

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cities.

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, many buildings are surrounded by dust from industrial factories.

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, the community and government do not have solutions for

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phenomenon, which means the majority cannot be aware of the environmental problem.

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cannot cause too much change to the environment, it seems to me that the population plays a vital role in

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issue.

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