Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is not fair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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exceptional budgets for

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around the world are extraordinary.

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some people believe that it is important to appreciate successful

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, others argue that there are other professions that have paramount importance and should gain better salaries than

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.

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essay will discuss both views and I am against the view that spending considerable amounts for sports

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. At the outset, there is strong competition between prestigious stadiums around the world. Maintaining superiorities is considered the main trigger for incurring huge amounts for

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annually.

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, there is a public consensus to appreciate successful professionals,

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their rare and unique proficiency ,

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the overwhelming pressure that they are challenging.

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, the Olympic games are a worldwide competition and

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to an array of challenges.

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, they should gain marvellous amounts because they represent their countries in competitions. In sharp contrast, in my opinion,

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the existence of sports

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is important, it is not as essential as other vital professions which ensure the basic needs of citizens.

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,

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' absence will not affect negatively on the individual.

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, other occupations offer services for myriads of people, and the lack of those services can pose a dilemma in society.

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, a vast majority of parents provoke their offspring

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football

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instead

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of instigating them to be doctors, engineers or other viable careers. Because playing football will ensure a better financial future. in

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a scenario, it is

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to pay attention to other professions

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adjust their monetary conditions and foster their presence.

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,

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there is a catalyst for paying huge salaries to

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because of their unique proficiency in competitions, others concur that public careers should gain more salaries because those functions play a pivotal role and their existence surpasses the sports player in society.