You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter Say which points in the article you agree with Explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Edior-in-chief, The purpose of my writing today is to provide my viewpoints on your article about
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centres dated 08/142023.
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some people may agree that all our national
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centres are unique by design, I would like to differ based on multifarious reasons which I will conclude and justify in the following paragraphs. No doubt, I second your article about the main architectural idea around our
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centres is unique as designed by City survey department.
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planning follows a standard format considering the roadways, waterways and public safety measures.
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, every
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centre
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in our country carries its own culture and variety based on geography and locality. My own
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displays a mix of shops and places based on my state's agricultural nature. On top of
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hosts the biggest traders in India towards the export of vegetables and grains like sugar, soybean and rice.
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, to support my opinion and provide greater insight into my
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's rich
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, I would like to cordially invite you for a show-and-tell tour. I will be your proud host. Based on the assertions above, I am hopeful that
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would make a positive insight for future related articles. Should you need any additional information, I will be glad to assist you. Regards, Juwel Patil
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