The provided table illustrates the milk production in a year in four countries (Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania, Guatemala) in 1990, 2000 and 2010

The provided table illustrates the milk production in a year in four countries (Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania, Guatemala) in 1990, 2000 and 2010
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the given table compares the amount of produced
milk
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during the previous two decades in four different nations Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania and Guatemala.
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, it is evident that the
production
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trend for the four countries experienced an upward tendency.
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with, as can be seen, the Netherlands hit the top of
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production
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where started with 11262000
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then
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displayed a marginal decline in 2000 to record 11155000
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but ended with a significant upsurge of 11466000
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. The second country
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in front of the digits is Australia but the pattern was reversed for
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production
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when Australia registered a gradual decrease over the period in 1990 and produced 11246000
litres
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11105000 the boasted a drop in 2010 to 9165000.
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,
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the second half of the table demonstrates the smallest volume of
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production
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, the
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registered a noticeable growth over the period. Tanzania increased in 2010 by roughly double of 1990, when it began with 87000
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then
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contributed 142000
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and abruptly reached 155000
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. the same pattern was true in Guatemala, the figures supplied levelling up by the end of the period when in 1990 was at merely 26000 but produced around 8400
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in 2010.
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indicates people's consumption of
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showed more progress.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, production, litres with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • milk production
  • trends
  • economic development
  • growth rates
  • leading producer
  • technological advancements
  • policy changes
  • climatic conditions
  • global impact
  • dairy industry
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