The oficce you work in does not have any cafeteria for staff. Write a letter your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staff.

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Dear Sir I hope

this

letter for you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing

this

letter with the crucial purpose of complaining, about I work office does not have any cafeteria for staff. I ask you to organize a cafeteria. On the one hand, the first important thing which should be mentioned is that

this

also

causing various inconveniences to the employees. Because some of our employees have some health problems and they usually need to eat fast, but our office does not have the conditions for

this

. On the other side, I hope that you will find a solution to

this

soon because some of our workers are leaving work

due to

the lack of a coffee shop, which is causing inconvenience to our office. So you will find a solution to

this

soon, it is important to us.

Finally

, having given the previous facts , I hope you will take immediate action in order to solve the issue

as well as

look forward to hearing from you in the future .

Thus

do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully Sarvinoz

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