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Men occupy most of the top-level jobs. Should government reserve more jobs for women? Give your opinion.

#men #jobs #government #reserve #women
Our
society
 seems to be a bit biased on the topic of providing top jobs to
women
. Though we pretend to show equal rights to
women
 still trends tell a different story. let's discuss
further
 to find out the best possible solution
along with
 my opinion.
Firstly
, I would like to say
women
 are not behind in any of the fields. They are getting top rankings in schools and universities. Ladies are breaking all the barriers and flying high by holding the pilot seat. Many of the successful businesses are operated and led by them. Having all
such
 extensive qualities still I believe
women's
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women
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 are still behind in
this
 men-dominated
society
.
Secondly
,
Women
 even after having all the natural complications and
society
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 challenges manage to work and leave their impact with good work. Reservation can help them to have better financial support and live their life in a better way.
Moreover
, We talk about
women
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women's
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 empowerment and there not even in the top positions of local government offices. It has been proven that they possess immense talent but still somehow men hold better positions. Equality can only be enforced only if the government takes
this
 seriously. In conclusion, I would like to take
this
 notice to the government to take the necessary steps and reserve a portion of jobs for
women
 and provide them with the power to change
society
 and the perspective to broaden their minds.
Submitted by hiteshpaul on

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