the graph below shows the proportion of four different material that were recycled that were recycled from 1982 to 2010

the graph below shows the proportion of four different material that were recycled that were recycled from 1982 to 2010
The line graphs show the percentage of recycling rates for selected materials from 1982 to 2010 in a certain country.
Overall
, starting in 1982, paper and cardboard were mostly recycled goods, followed by
glass
containers
in second place. In different
year
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years
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, aluminium cans started being recycled in 1984 and plastic just started being recycled in 1988.
However
, aluminium cans just started recycling in 1984, but they have a sharp incline
trend
from
year
to
year
and have the highest point in 2010. Followed by Plastic which started to be recycled in 1988, and has a steady
trend
from
year
to
year
.
On the other hand
, paper and cupboards,
also
glass
containers
have a fluctuating
trend
. Paper and cupboards had a slight decline from 1984 to 1988, but there was a big boost between 1990 and 1994. Even though the
trend
has declined gradually, it is still the most recycled in 2010. The fluctuation in
glass
containers
declined steadily from 1982 to 1990.
However
, over the next
year
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the recycling of
glass
containers
boosted significantly from 1990 to 2010.
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