The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to product electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given figure illustrates the steps to
product
electricity with geothermal energy. Replace the word
produce
Overall
, there are five steps from processing the cold water as raw material until it turn
into electricity. The process Change the verb form
turns
conducted
below and Add a missing verb
is conducted
in
the surface.
Change preposition
on
Firstly
, the process is initiated by pumping down the cold water into the injection well 4.5 kilometres deep. It then
passes through the hot rocks (absorbing the heat) within the geothermal zone and travels towards the production well, which is the same height as the injection well. Here, the hot water gets pumped up to reach the inside of the condenser.
After being condensed into steam, it gets transferred into the turbine and acts as the power source to operate. Once the turbine starts functioning, it allows the generator to start working, resulting in the production of electricity which will be distributed through electric towers.Submitted by sidneynatasha16 on
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