Some countries have introduced laws to limit the working hours that an employer can ask from an employee. Why are these law introduced? Is this a positive or negative trend?

In most countries, but not all, it is becoming a prevalent situation to impose some
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related to
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reduce
the working
hours
of employees in their
work
- time. In my opinion,
although
it has both potential benefits and drawbacks,it leads to
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of
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life
as well as
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. There are several major reasons associated with imposing
laws
about limiting working
hours
. One of the core reasons
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such
laws
might
to
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promote a
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healthier
work- life
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balance. Excessive working
hours
,
for instance
,can lead to physical and mental health issues,stress and burnout,negatively affecting employeesʼ
overall
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. If people have a workload,
that is
,they
work
12 to 16
hours
in a given day, they certainly cannot spend enough time
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their family and own life.
Furthermore
, gender equality can be one
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reason why to introduce
such
laws
, because, when women
workers
are
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work
, their children and
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home choirs
may be in disregarding state.
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of
laws
can help not only to
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equal
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responsibilities between
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and male in the family but
also
to spend sufficient time for caregiving and
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domestic
tasks. To my mind,
this
trend follows more positive sides rather than negative ones cause of having benefits in every aspect. If some factories
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people who lose their health
work
put
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of
laws
, they would give some help
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their employees in ways of health and
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. Limiting working
hours
can reduce stress
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the
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work
and
also
burnout and
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focus
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outside of
work
.The
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doctor
job,
for example
,is really too demanding,
thus
they are tired easily
as well as
might
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some mental problems in their lifestyle.
Therefore
, limiting working
hours
is
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benefit for all
workers
in so many strict ways. In conclusion, it is true that imposing some
laws
related to reducing
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can
be
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cause to be healthier and well- being and always it is
apreciated
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appreciated
by all
workers
in terms of positive consequences.
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