Economic growth is the only way to end world poverty. However, some people say it leads to enviroment damage and should be stopped. To what extent do you agree?

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leads to environmental issues, and should not continue. I totally agree with

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argument, even though it is believed that economic growth can help to end world poverty.

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with, an increase in the economy in some countries usually

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by industries. It is because industries can help to increase a country's income through export trading.

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, in the United Emirates Arab, their economy is growing because of the oil and mining industries. They are able to export their oil and mining resources to other countries.

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, industry

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often generate pollution in the form of water and air pollution.

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pollution can affect several environmental issues

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as global warming and climate change, which can harm all species on the earth. In fact, countries still can manage their economies side by side with protecting the environment. In order to solve

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issue, governments can create a

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for businesses in running their

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, a

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for waste disposal for the industry to prevent the

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caused by the manufacturer

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businesses that do not implement

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in their

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need to pay the fine and get a punishment, and they need to stop operating their businesses until they can solve the disposal issue.

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, the business player itself can create a program of Corporate Social Responsibility with a focus on environmental activity,

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as planting trees

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or cleaning waste in certain areas.

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, economic growth can harm the environment is a fact

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the activity that usually can generate

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which can lead to environmental issues.

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, there are several solutions to solve

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issue by creating a

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for the waste disposal process and Corporate Social Responsibility events.