In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

While
it is true that
the
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vehicles, namely
cars
, buses,
trucks
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and trucks
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will not be driven by
people
, it is difficult to determine whether driverless
vehicler
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vehicle
vehicles
or going on travel inside the vehicles will be more important for
people
. It seems to me driving
cars
without operating a man has some advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, if
the
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cars
, buses and trailers will be used without driving by
man
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men
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,
it
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they
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might be operated as electronic devices.
Besides
,
such
kind of
people
will have more opportunities in way of
traveling
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travelling
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besides
such
kind of operating the vehicles might not be lead to road accidents that they often occur when the
cars
, buses are driven by
people
.
Moreover
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people
can lose control in driving which
closely
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connected to their physical mental state.
On the other hand
,
people
will move only as passengers in different cases
that
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and
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it is not convenient to depend on any operating system. In fact, some electronic devices are not available for use.
Moreover
, they will not be connected, if they
have
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not any charging. In conclusion, I think that driverless transport has both sides: positive and negative. I am convinced that the way of travelling by
people
driving has a positive effect on
people
's choice.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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