the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2106. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015
The bar chart illustrates the export earnings in different fields in a specific country from 2015
till
2016, Change preposition
to
while
the table provides information about some proportion changes in values between these two years.
Looking from the overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that petroleum and engineered goods brought the highest amount of money during the whole period, while
other categories were less exported. However
, textiles experienced the most significant incline in a one-year period.
With regards to money, the field with the highest income was petroleum products, with just over 60 billion
dollars in 2015, then
in 2016
it raised to approximately 63 Add a comma
,2016
billion
dollars. Engineered goods take second place at accounted for nearly 58 billion
and 62 billion
in 2015 and 2016 respectively.
According to
the percentage change, textiles export witnessed the most considerable raise in 2016 (from 25 to 31 billion
dollars), followed by engineered goods, which raised by 8,5%. Also
, germs and jewellery slightly decreased by 5,18%, compared with agriculture and petroleum product, which did not have big fluctuationsSubmitted by sofsya.fedorenko.2001 on
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