the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2106. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015

the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2106. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015
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The bar chart illustrates the export earnings in different fields in a specific country from 2015
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2016,
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the table provides information about some proportion changes in values between these two years. Looking from the
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perspective, it is readily apparent that petroleum and engineered goods brought the highest amount of money during the whole period,
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other categories were less exported.
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, textiles experienced the most significant incline in a one-year period. With regards to money, the field with the highest income was petroleum products, with just over 60
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dollars in 2015,
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in
2016
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it raised to approximately 63
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dollars. Engineered goods take second place at accounted for nearly 58
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and 62
billion
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in 2015 and 2016 respectively.
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the percentage change, textiles export witnessed the most considerable raise in 2016 (from 25 to 31
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dollars), followed by engineered goods, which raised by 8,5%.
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, germs and jewellery slightly decreased by 5,18%, compared with agriculture and petroleum product, which did not have big fluctuations
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • trend analysis
  • anomalies
  • percentage change
  • sector analysis
  • global demand
  • domestic production
  • economic conditions
  • technological advancements
  • international regulations
  • economic growth
  • trade relations
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