Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A group of individuals present the view that in

this

contemporary era, the major problem is the lack of special

species

of

plants

and

animals

,

whereas

others believe more substantial dilemmas associated with the

environment

have been occurring. I wholeheartedly agree with the latter opinion since

pollution

and deforestation are more vital difficulties. On the one hand, some people justifiably believe that what humans need is a clean

environment

such

as weather, water

and

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etc.

Moreover

, these days,

due to

human activities, not only have polluted

this

planet but

also

there are no strict regulations to play an obstacle role in front of deforestation.

In addition

, oceans have been polluted by dumping waste which results in the irrigation system of agriculture and

then

our foods.

Therefore

, polluting and cutting down trees are more deleterious issues. To put it in a different way, people are abusing

this

invaluable

environment

for personal purposes.

For instance

, some furniture companies have been cutting down walnut trees illegally so as to produce luxurious tables and other products which leads to consumerism and more waste.

On the other hand

, another group of people argue that the

extinction

of some

species

of

animals

and

plants

are

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more harmful to our

surrounding

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. They

also

insist that

this

extinction

will have brought about a food shortage in the next few years.

However

, I do not find

this

argument convincing as it is undeniable that protecting the

animals

and plant

species

is vital,

meanwhile

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pollution

in the air and water has been affecting these

species

as well.

For example

, a huge number of fish have been poisoned by the waste of industries.

Consequently

, all the

environment

require

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is for mankind to prohibit

pollution

and strive to compensate. If these two issues are allocated by countries, there will be a greater place for

species

.

To conclude

, in my view, there have been

occurring

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more significant dilemmas which outweigh the process of

extinction

of some

plants

and

animals

. Mankind’s activities have influenced our planet

such

as

pollution

and deforestation.

Furthermore

, resisting in front of

pollution

can have positive impacts on

animals

and

plants

which are near

extinction

.