Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A group of individuals present the view that in

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contemporary era, the major problem is the lack of special

species

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of

plants

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and

animals

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,

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others believe more substantial dilemmas associated with the

environment

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have been occurring. I wholeheartedly agree with the latter opinion since

pollution

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and deforestation are more vital difficulties. On the one hand, some people justifiably believe that what humans need is a clean

environment

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as weather, water

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etc.

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, these days,

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human activities, not only have polluted

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planet but

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there are no strict regulations to play an obstacle role in front of deforestation.

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, oceans have been polluted by dumping waste which results in the irrigation system of agriculture and

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our foods.

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, polluting and cutting down trees are more deleterious issues. To put it in a different way, people are abusing

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invaluable

environment

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for personal purposes.

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, some furniture companies have been cutting down walnut trees illegally so as to produce luxurious tables and other products which leads to consumerism and more waste.

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, another group of people argue that the

extinction

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of some

species

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of

animals

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and

plants

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are

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more harmful to our

surrounding

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. They

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insist that

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extinction

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will have brought about a food shortage in the next few years.

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, I do not find

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argument convincing as it is undeniable that protecting the

animals

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and plant

species

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is vital,

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pollution

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in the air and water has been affecting these

species

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as well.

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, a huge number of fish have been poisoned by the waste of industries.

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, all the

environment

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require

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is for mankind to prohibit

pollution

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and strive to compensate. If these two issues are allocated by countries, there will be a greater place for

species

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.

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, in my view, there have been

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more significant dilemmas which outweigh the process of

extinction

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of some

plants

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and

animals

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. Mankind’s activities have influenced our planet

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as

pollution

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and deforestation.

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, resisting in front of

pollution

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can have positive impacts on

animals

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and

plants

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which are near

extinction

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.