Many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather than rent it. Do you agree with this statement or not ?

Nowadays, more and more

people

choosing to buy homes to live in

while

the number of

people

who rent homes

is decrease

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.

This

writer strongly agrees with

this

opinion and will show the point of view in

this

essay. First of all, owning a

home

is the sense of security it provides. They can live in their house

permanent

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and no one can

asked

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them to leave. It means that they have a place to live

in

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and call their own.

Moreover

, it

worth

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for

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the

people

who have worked hard to save up money to buy a property.

This

feeling of security is crucial, as it allows individuals to have a sense of belonging in their community and provides a stable environment for their

family

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families

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. Not only that, when

people

purchasing

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a

home

, they can decorate their atmosphere with their own imprints. It offers the ability to enjoy the independence and convenience of a comfortable lifestyle when they get

home

after a long day. One important thing

that

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the prices of houses usually rise every year.

For example

, the costs of houses in The UK rise four

percent

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in

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every single year.

To conclude

, the desire to purchase a

home

instead

of renting one is given many benefits. It provides financial security, an opportunity to build equity and more privacy.

While

there are some drawbacks

such

as maintenance costs but

this

writer believes that buying a

home

is

positive

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development

and

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that should be encouraged.