You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The diagram illustrates, the life stages of the honey bee. As we can see, the life cycle of the honey bee takes between 34 to 36
days
, and contain only 4 stages.
At the beginning of the process, females lay on 1 or 2 eggs every three days
. Then
, eggs hatch after 9 to 10 days
. Between 5 to 9 days
, Nymph moults 3 times while
it grows. After that, the small nymph become
a young adult emerges. Change the verb form
becomes
Finally
, and
after 4 Correct word choice
apply
days
, it is changed to maturity.Submitted by halah.z.alamri on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words days with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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