Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages.
Some
people
choice
living close to where they were born, others are not. Some Replace the word
choose
people
do not want to give up their security zone, conversily
others Correct your spelling
conversely
does
not. Today I would like to talk about these reasons, Change the verb form
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advantages
and disadvantages.
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were born, they lives and finally
deadh
. The most important thing, Correct your spelling
died
while
you are living how
to live. Some Add a missing verb
is how
people
are concerned about if they go to
far from their family or district. Because They are used to relax and do not give up Replace the word
too
this
comfortable. They are feeling happy for themselves this
circle which is their Change preposition
in this
city
, famlies
,friends etc. What are the Correct your spelling
families
advantages
of this
? These people
are
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apply
continuos
keep in touch Correct your spelling
continuous
their
family, friends, cities etc. They do not miss lots of things. Because Change preposition
with their
Everthing
which are Correct your spelling
Everything
miss
is already Wrong verb form
missing
their
close. İf they want to meet close friends just only they call him/her and they can meet easily. They do not use Correct your spelling
there
like
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When
in
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on
holiday
we will see each other, ı miss you so much etc"
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the holiday
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situations
situation
lots of
. I would like to one example from Correct quantifier usage
apply
in
my Change preposition
apply
life
. My dad
is civil
engineer. He studied İstanbul which is one of the best and biggest Add an article
a civil
the civil
city
in Turkey. After he graduated from university he returned to his Change to a plural noun
cities
orginally
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original
originally
city
which name is Erzurum. Erzurum is small
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a small
city
and there is
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are
no
lot of Correct your spelling
not
adavantages
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advantages
about
work Change preposition
to
life
. And my dad
knew that, he has never given up Erzurum. He married, worked and retired in there. Therefore
my dad
's life
has been stabil
up till now. His Correct your spelling
stable
colleques
took promotion Correct your spelling
colleagues
their
work Change preposition
of their
life
how to removed
other Wrong verb form
remove
city
and gain other experience. but My Fix the agreement mistake
cities
dad
did not. Even his asistant
engineer became general manager at the same Correct your spelling
assistant
coorporation
. Correct your spelling
corporation
Unfortunatelly
, Correct your spelling
Unfortunately
thus
, my dad
's vision did not improved
. because he has lived in Change the verb form
improve
small
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a small
the small
city
that is
mean
he has lived to close where he was born and their extended family.
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means
To sum up
, somebody have
to look Change the verb form
has
around
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at
advantages
and Correct article usage
the advantages
diadvantages
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disadvantages
after
that he/she should decide to where liveCorrect word choice
and after
in
. Change preposition
apply
if
the Capitalize word
If
city
does not offer lot
of Change the article
a lot
advantages
to us we should remove where we live. Because techonology
is improving day by day. İf you want to go to Correct your spelling
technology
yours
Correct the word
your
city
you can arrive there within a maximum 1
day, Change preposition
of 1
minimum
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a minimum
1
hour. Change preposition
of 1
That is
why, we should not miss advantages
that Correct article usage
the advantages
life
is offer to us because of distance.Submitted by gokhnceylan on
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