You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

Nowadays, it is said using advanced technology comes with its own pros and cons.

while

regular usage of technologies

benefit

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the youngster; some say that it has

greater

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number of demerits.

This

essay strongly agrees with that because it motivates children to become lethargic and

also

it is causing diseases like obesity and eyesight problems In recent times, it has been observed that the younger generation often likes to stay at home as they are more interested in playing video games and binge-watching different shows resulting in poor health. Studies have shown that exercise and spending

time

in nature

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shown great results in psychological behaviour.

For example

,my niece is just 10 years old and she loves to stay at home rather than go out and play games that require

full-body

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workout.

However

, kids are expected to be fully charged up all the

time

, but they get tired easily. Sitting in one place all the

time

on the computer can cause some diseases which are often overlooked by

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people. Having weak eyesight is the biggest problem of

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youngsters as they spend

maximum

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a maximum

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amount of

time

on screens.

For instance

, I know one family whose all three kids always spend their spare

time

on the computer

hence

they have put on glasses

due to

weak eyesight.

Also

, obesity in young people is

also

common these days. In conclusion, there are more disadvantages

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using computers in day-to-day life. Not going out and playing games make youngsters more lethargic and low on energy.

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, excessive usage can cause illnesses like short or long-sightedness and obesity.