You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

Nowadays, it is said using advanced technology comes with its own pros and cons.
while
regular usage of technologies
benefit
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the youngster; some say that it has
greater
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number of demerits.
This
essay strongly agrees with that because it motivates children to become lethargic and
also
it is causing diseases like obesity and eyesight problems In recent times, it has been observed that the younger generation often likes to stay at home as they are more interested in playing video games and binge-watching different shows resulting in poor health. Studies have shown that exercise and spending
time
in nature
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shown great results in psychological behaviour.
For example
,my niece is just 10 years old and she loves to stay at home rather than go out and play games that require
full-body
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workout.
However
, kids are expected to be fully charged up all the
time
, but they get tired easily. Sitting in one place all the
time
on the computer can cause some diseases which are often overlooked by
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people. Having weak eyesight is the biggest problem of
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youngsters as they spend
maximum
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amount of
time
on screens.
For instance
, I know one family whose all three kids always spend their spare
time
on the computer
hence
they have put on glasses
due to
weak eyesight.
Also
, obesity in young people is
also
common these days. In conclusion, there are more disadvantages
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using computers in day-to-day life. Not going out and playing games make youngsters more lethargic and low on energy.
Also
, excessive usage can cause illnesses like short or long-sightedness and obesity.
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