Nowadays, it is said using advanced technology comes with its own pros and cons.
while
regular usage of technologiesLinking Words
benefit
the youngster; some say that it has Change the verb form
benefits
greater
number of demerits. Correct article usage
a greater
This
essay strongly agrees with that because it motivates children to become lethargic and Linking Words
also
it is causing diseases like obesity and eyesight problems
In recent times, it has been observed that the younger generation often likes to stay at home as they are more interested in playing video games and binge-watching different shows resulting in poor health. Studies have shown that exercise and spending Linking Words
time
in nature Use synonyms
have
shown great results in psychological behaviour. Change the verb form
has
For example
,my niece is just 10 years old and she loves to stay at home rather than go out and play games that require Linking Words
full-body
workout. Add an article
a full-body
However
, kids are expected to be fully charged up all the Linking Words
time
, but they get tired easily.
Sitting in one place all the Use synonyms
time
on the computer can cause some diseases which are often overlooked by Use synonyms
the
people. Having weak eyesight is the biggest problem of Correct article usage
apply
the
youngsters as they spend Correct article usage
apply
maximum
amount of Correct article usage
a maximum
time
on screens. Use synonyms
For instance
, I know one family whose all three kids always spend their spare Linking Words
time
on the computer Use synonyms
hence
they have put on glasses Linking Words
due to
weak eyesight. Linking Words
Also
, obesity in young people is Linking Words
also
common these days.
In conclusion, there are more disadvantages Linking Words
of
using computers in day-to-day life. Not going out and playing games make youngsters more lethargic and low on energy. Change preposition
to
Also
, excessive usage can cause illnesses like short or long-sightedness and obesity.Linking Words
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